Person 1: This person is 45 years old and teaches history at a high school. He is a pretty bad teacher and does not spend much time with the students. He is online all day looking for anything entertainment wise to pass the hours of the day. He is fat and struggling with some health problems.Person 2: A young man in college, at the age of 27. He is in criminal justice and is very healthy. He is a straight B- student. Although he has potential, he spends too much time on social websites, mostly facebook and twitter.
Person 3: An aspiring model, she is 36 and very underweight. She worries about her health but will do anything for a shot at her dream career. She spends most of her day on social websites messaging famous fashion designers hoping for a chance.
I made a lot of changes to the website. I cut down about 90% of the writing on the page. I brought the page tabs to the top so they are easy to see and put entertainment and health near the top so my customers. I also made the top story picture bigger so it's very visual and easy to find. Finally, i took away the social media selections, such as facebook and twitter, from the bottom and put in a selection of big, easy to see, buttons near the top of the page for very easy access.
